“Ring!” It was time for recess! My class rushed down the stairs and ran to the canteen. When I was eating my bowl of noodles, I saw the big bully who had always bullied me whenever I bumped into him. His name was Matt. He had always horsed around in school. When he was bored, he would stand furtively beside the stairs awaiting any unsuspecting victim. Everyone in school, including some teachers, was afraid of him. In fact, I am feeling goosebumps all over as I recalled an incident one year ago…
That year, I was in primary two and Matt was in primary five. Once he actually gave me a call and challenged me to a fight. When I hung up the phone, I stood rooted to the ground not knowing what to do next. After that, I wolfed down my food and thought hard how to teach him a lesson for bullying so many of us. I felt an albatross around my neck and was all thumbs when I tried to call my mother who was at work. I asked my mother for advice but she did not offer any as she was busy.
When I met Matt the following day, I felt a shiver down my spine. I decided to chicken out from the brawl. I decided that it was better for me to use my wits to teach him a lesson instead. I fished out my phone to call Matt’s mother after searching the phonebook for hours. Of course, his mother gave Matt a good spanking. Everyone in school was elated and those who had been bullied by him before were on cloud nine. For me, I was over the moon as I felt like a hero for that day. My father and mother crowed about me in front of everybody. I hope the big bully, Matt, had learned his lesson.
Story written by Xing Yue (3K)
25 comments:
very nice story
She is a good writer n she is also my last year classmate.NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she good i can never write some thing like she so good
Dear Wendy,
Have faith in yourself. I'm sure you can do it if you put your mind to it. Remember you are Wonderful Wendy.
Cheers,
Mr Kok
It is a very nice story and she also got write all the golden words that we have been learning
This story is so nice I must learn how to write a story from now
I thick xiyue must be more criavtiv
Good example story. Very nice!!!
I think XiYue is a good writer but she must learn more past tens.
From Mendel
Dear Mr Kok I will try my best and thank you ! :D
Xing Yue is a good writer!!!!!
why?because you Dont know how to write. HUH?
She use golden words.
And it is very intresting
story.
This story is marvellous.I hope i could write a story like this too!
I think XING YUE use the golden words very good
she use golden words
What a nice story!!!
She got use golden words.
11 February 2010 8:43PM
i wish i could be like her too
very good xing yue my friend you never let me down very good...
I like Wen Ye's writeing
From Mendel
VERY GOOD
i love she story because she use many goden to help her,but she past tense isn't good .
best wishes, jing wen
I think some of you write me nane wrongly!!!
Xing Yue
( student from 3K )
well they are praiseing you.
i think xing yue is good
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