Wednesday, February 3, 2010

A Great piece to share....by Xing Yue

“Ring!” It was time for recess! My class rushed down the stairs and ran to the canteen. When I was eating my bowl of noodles, I saw the big bully who had always bullied me whenever I bumped into him. His name was Matt. He had always horsed around in school. When he was bored, he would stand furtively beside the stairs awaiting any unsuspecting victim. Everyone in school, including some teachers, was afraid of him. In fact, I am feeling goosebumps all over as I recalled an incident one year ago…

That year, I was in primary two and Matt was in primary five. Once he actually gave me a call and challenged me to a fight. When I hung up the phone, I stood rooted to the ground not knowing what to do next. After that, I wolfed down my food and thought hard how to teach him a lesson for bullying so many of us. I felt an albatross around my neck and was all thumbs when I tried to call my mother who was at work. I asked my mother for advice but she did not offer any as she was busy.

When I met Matt the following day, I felt a shiver down my spine. I decided to chicken out from the brawl. I decided that it was better for me to use my wits to teach him a lesson instead. I fished out my phone to call Matt’s mother after searching the phonebook for hours. Of course, his mother gave Matt a good spanking. Everyone in school was elated and those who had been bullied by him before were on cloud nine. For me, I was over the moon as I felt like a hero for that day. My father and mother crowed about me in front of everybody. I hope the big bully, Matt, had learned his lesson.



Story written by Xing Yue (3K)

25 comments:

sheilaho said...

very nice story

Lee Yao said...

She is a good writer n she is also my last year classmate.NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WENDY said...

she good i can never write some thing like she so good

Mr Kok said...

Dear Wendy,

Have faith in yourself. I'm sure you can do it if you put your mind to it. Remember you are Wonderful Wendy.

Cheers,
Mr Kok

leejoey said...

It is a very nice story and she also got write all the golden words that we have been learning

tingfang said...

This story is so nice I must learn how to write a story from now

wenye said...

I thick xiyue must be more criavtiv

gin yen said...

Good example story. Very nice!!!

Mendel said...

I think XiYue is a good writer but she must learn more past tens.

From Mendel

wendy li said...

Dear Mr Kok I will try my best and thank you ! :D

gin yen said...

Xing Yue is a good writer!!!!!

stanley said...

why?because you Dont know how to write. HUH?

chufeng said...

She use golden words.
And it is very intresting
story.

kelven low said...

This story is marvellous.I hope i could write a story like this too!

Lii Wen said...

I think XING YUE use the golden words very good

sheilaho said...

she use golden words

Po-Han said...

What a nice story!!!
She got use golden words.







11 February 2010 8:43PM

tan shi ling said...

i wish i could be like her too

Emily lim said...

very good xing yue my friend you never let me down very good...

Mendel said...

I like Wen Ye's writeing

From Mendel

ERVIN said...

VERY GOOD

huang jing wen said...

i love she story because she use many goden to help her,but she past tense isn't good .



best wishes, jing wen

Teo Xing Yue said...

I think some of you write me nane wrongly!!!





Xing Yue
( student from 3K )

stanley said...

well they are praiseing you.

mei sin said...

i think xing yue is good