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One cool morning, Lon, the small chicken, was singing at the grass patch. Suddenly, a demon bat and an evil crow spotted Lon singing happily. They decided that they wanted to roast Lon in an oven to eat. Lon stopped singing and stay rooted to the ground and he did not know what to do and actually he could feel a shiver down his spine. When Lon turned his head just about to run, he saw a furtively looking woman.” Why is she here?" thought Lon. She was actually there to look for pets. When she saw that Lon is in danger, she quickly called her albatross to punish the evil ones. (The evil ones always get punished for their bad deeds.) The albatross swooped down from the woman’s shoulder to have a fight with the crow and the bat. BIN BIN BANG BANG!!! After some minutes, the fight was over. The albatross won! The woman shouted happily, "Victory, victory!" The albatross seemed tired after his morning fight.
That evening, Lon, the woman and the albatross were sitting together eating dinner. Lon feeling much better because he was no longer in danger. When dinner time was over, Lon sang a popular tune that everyone knew. The next morning, the woman built a stage and Lon sang the song which was very famous and the woman became rich.
THE END
Author: Gin Yen
7 comments:
One fine day At school there was a new kid at school his name was bill. One day I recived a letter from him he said that he want to chanlange me to a fight I dicded to chicken out as I have a shiver down my spine just not that I aslo stood rooted to the ground then an idea came to my mind and I think I should play a trick on him. The next day we meet at the play ground and as he attck me I have catch a bat an I relesd it and the bat scare him I won and I think I teach him a lesson.
Dear Mr Able Kok this particular homework do it in book or what
from,
Emily
Monday morning,Sharon father have the chicken at his house,then the Shron crowed about it.The one woman come here and say:"The bat is at the tree."she shouted.The bat fly down want to eat the small chicken.it fly like the eagle.Sharon stand near the tree because he don't the bat to bite him.He was shiver down my spine and screamed loudly.then the bat fly own to catch it.So he was sad because the bat catch the small chicken.
Best wishes,Jing Wen
One day a boy call Alvin was a bully , he aways bully studants in Hong Wen School.On 16 March he score 99/100 for his exam,so he crow about in the class.In the class he saw Jonah had a very shiny foot ball.Alvin looks very fertively because he wants to take the ball!Luckly a teacher pass by and saw Alvin takeing the ball.the teacher flu like a bat to stop him .After that the teacher pansh him Alvin just feel like an albertross around his nak,stood rooted and felt a shiver in his back.After yestherday he larn his lesson. THE END
The woman who save Lon
One cool morning,Lon,the small chicken,was singing in the grass.Suddenly,a demon bat and a evil crow spot Lon singing in the grass.They decided that they wanted to roast Lon in a oven to eat.Lon stop singing and stay rooted to the ground and he didn`t know what to do and actually he can feel the shiver down his spine.When Lon turned his head just about to run,he saw a furtively looking woman with a muscle strong albatross around her neck."Why is she here"though Lon.Answer:she is here to look for pets.When she saw that Lon is in danger,she quickly call her albatross to punish the evil ones.(The evil ones always get for their punishment because they always do bad things.)The albatross swooped down from the woman`s neck to have a fight between the crow and the bat.BIN BIN BANG BANG!!!After some minutes, the fight is over.The albatross won!The woman shouted happily:"Victory,victory!!!"The albatross seemed tired after his morning fight.That evening,Lon,the woman and the albatross was sitting together eating dinner.Lon feeling much better because he is not in danger now.When dinner time is over,Lon sang a song that it is very famous.The next morning,the woman built a stage and Lon sang the song which was very famous and the woman gets rich.
THE END
gin yen is a wonderful write
dear gin yen,
i think that you can be a writer when you grow up.you think so?
from,
tan shi ling
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