You may want to work on any of these topics:
- My family
- If I ruled a country, I would...
- The day that changed my life forever
Please make sure that you have written more than 300 words, not exceeding 600.
Also do note that only the best entries will be submitted for this competition organised by Scholastic Pte Ltd.
Happy writing...Submit your entries under the comments with your name and register number.
Cheers,
Mr Kok
Congratulations to Michelle... your piece will be sent in for the competition. Best of luck.
Michelle Law Shi Ni (3C)
One Monday, in 3C, there is a monster on the teacher’s chair. It is green in colour, it looks like a jelly and he has a very huge mouth but he talks very softly, he is also very nice to everyone. His name is Puii. His best friend is Mr. Abel Kok, because he teaches Mr. Abel Kok many good things and tells him secrets. Puii told Mr. Abel Kok to tell the class that we must keep quiet and do not horse around in class. When the teacher is away, we must sit on our seat and read a book and do not leave our seat. So, when it is Thursday Mr. Abel Kok told us that Puii was very ill. So some pupils write a get well soon letter and gave Puii. I also gave him a get well soon letter too.
When Puii got the get well soon letter he was elated and he recovered very quickly. We were very frightened to ask Puii if he is getting well or not so we always ask Mr. Abel Kok that he has recovered or not. I will always remember Puii told Mr. Abel Kok what. So I will call those who are noisy to keep quiet, and tell them to read a story book, and call them do not leave their own seat, because I am one of the monitor. So when it is on Friday Mr. Abel Kok told us a bad news he told us that Puii is playing with his grand children so he cannot join our class for some days.
After we got the news that Puii is playing with his grand children, we were very sad that he is not able to playing with us but we were also relived that he had recovered. After a few days, he came back to 3C and played with all of us, we were all on cloud nine, with Puii in our class our attitude towards studying had improved very much. All of my classmates would like to say a big thank you to Puii for playing with all of us in 3C. Whether Puii is an imaginary friend or not is not important, what is most important is that Puii makes me company whenever I am feeling lonely or sad. You are the greatest monster who really acts more like a guardian angel. Thank you so much for being my friend.
19 comments:
Dear Mr Abel Kok,
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My Family
My family has four people, me, sister, mother and father. I and my sister go to the same school, we go to Hong wen school, my schools the older school in Singapore. My mother works as a clera and my father works as a carpenter, my family is a happy. My mother and father are deaft, but I am not when I was small my mother always sine to me, on Sunday my family goes to the church. I know some people like to call me mentos but I do not care some times I feel angery, happy and sad, and my family to! So I love my family very much. THE END
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i cannot write more than 300 words
Dear Mr Abel Kok,
The first are wrong.I tend to type to fast.I should write"Dear Mr Abel Kok,
What is register number??????"
Dear Mr Abel Kok,
What can I write in my story?It is write anything you want?????????????
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dear mr abel kok,
what is this.
what to write.
what to to do.
lots of thanks to,
chang chu feng
rainbow is beatiful,song is nice hong wen is the best school,helping are good,teacher are smart,water are from sea
sorry...i do not how to do???????
A Tyannosaur Attack
(part one)
One sunny fine day,Tom was walking home,he had planned to do when he get home first:play computer,watch TV,lunch,nap,do homework,dinner,then bedtime.Suddenly,he saw a cave with a lot of voice inside.He peek inside the cave.A lot of plants were inside.A loudest voice came out from the cave."RRRRRRRROOOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!"Then,TRUMP TRUMP!!!!Then faster,TRUMP TRUMP TRUMP!!!!Then fastest,TRUMP TRUMP TRUMP TRUMP!!!!Tom was so interest that he get into the cave.First he put his right leg in the cave.Then he tumbled all over.BOINK BOINK BOINK!!!"OUCH!!!!!"he yelled at his top of his lungs.Then when he recovered from his bump,he peek from inside the giant plants.Uh-Oh.He had entered the dinosaur world!Behind the giant plants, there were some baby dinosaurs that were looking up at Tom.Tom was so happy that he forgot about what he had planned and danced all around.Then he stop dancing.Wait, where is the loudest voice dinosaur???Then he look at the one baby dinosaur.The baby dinosaur look back at him.Tom feeling very funny.Where got baby dinosaur can roar so loud???Maybe he was dreaming.So Tom put his hand to his head and knock his head,like a door.Knock knock knock,went his head."Ouch!"Gosh,he was not dreaming either.Hmmm....what tool can he find the loudest voice dinosaur???Quickly,he pulled out his electronic dinosaur dictionary.Then he read the words on the dictionary."Dinosaur dictionary,can look up any dinosaur you wanted to find."So Tom quickly switch it on and type in "The loudest voice dinosaur"Then when Tom clicked the word enter,within one second,the dictionary shows a lot of real pictures about the loudest voice dinosaur.Tom sees where is it found,where does it live,and a lot information from the dictionary.Then he go to the place where the dinosaur live."Hello?"Tom began."Is anybody home?"Tom stopped talking.A pair yellow eyes stare at him."RUN!!!!"comment a voice.Tom look back.Some pack of soldiers was running toward him."RUN!!!!"shouted thhe chief of the soldiers."It is a Tyannosaur.It is a meat-eater.That means it eats everything that had meat on it`s prey!!!"Then the Tyannosaur began to chase Tom.Tom was feeling very scare and he start running.But..he was running towards the Tyannosaur!The Tyannosaur look at Tom.Tom doved through it`s legs."NICE TRY!!!!" shouted the chief.After the attack by the Tyannosaur,Tom and the pack of the soldiers had lunch together."Make sure you go the corret place next time."said the chief."I will."said Tom."I was just wanted to find the Tyannosaur."After lunch,Tom waved goodbye to the pack of soldiers and went home happily.
(part two is at next Saturday.)
The day that I change my life forever!
One Monday, in 3C, there is a monster on the teacher’s chair. It is green in colour, it looks like a jelly and he has a very huge mouth but he talk very softly, he is also very nice to everyone. His name is Puii. His best friend is Mr. Abel Kok, because he teaches Mr. Abel Kok many good things and tells him secrets. Puii told Mr. Abel Kok to tell the class that we must keep quiet and do not horse around in class. When the teacher is away, we must sit on our seat and read a book and do not leave our seat. So, when it is Thursday Mr. Abel Kok told us that Puii was very ill. So some pupils write a get well soon letter and gave Puii. I also gave him a get well soon letter too.
When Puii got the get well soon letter he was elated and he recovered very quickly. We were very frightened to ask Puii if he is getting well or not so we always ask Mr. Abel Kok that he has recovered or not. I will always remember Puii told Mr. Abel Kok what. So I will call those who are noisy to keep quiet, and tell them to read a story book, and call them do not leave their own seat, because I am one of the monitor. So when it is on Friday Mr. Abel Kok told us a bad news he told us that Puii is playing with his grand children so he cannot join our class for some days.
After we got the news that Puii is playing with his grand children, we were very sad that he is not able to playing with us but we were also relived that he had recovered. After a few days, he came back to 3C and played with all of us, we were all on cloud nine, with Puii in our class our attitude towards studying had improved very much. All of my classmates would like to say a big THANK YOU to Puii for playing with all of us in 3C.
THE END
world war (part 1)
One fine Day at singapore, people went shoping and some went cycling
even some even it was so cold some went to the beach can you belive it you not me not your family not anybody eles you get it you nvermind that now were was I oh the beach now let's begin as I was saying the bad Whether oh I forgot something somebody was farting
suddenly the alarm rang
(part two wii be on next week)
the end
Dear Stanley,
Are you copying me???????????
SO SCARY....??????
Wa!wad i wonderful class!How wish i was in tis class:(
you so goooood :D michelle!!!!!!!
who is jia sim
i also don't know
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