Saturday, February 6, 2010

The day that changed my life forever! by Irene

The day that changed my life forever the day that......

One day at the field, as I was playing with my cousin, I bumped into Puii. Puii was a nice monster. He was also Mr Abel Kok's best friend. Puii taught Mr Kok many things and shared many secrets. But today Puii was not feeling good. You know why?

Let me tell you! When I was trying to understand why was he so unhappy, he explained, "Irene, I can tell you why I am unhappy, but you can't tell anyone!" I agreed. After listening to him, I felt angry because he told me that the noise in our class was too loud and unbearable for him, so he wanted the teachers to be fierce, and not to be too kind and too nice. That was the challenge which Puii had given me.

He wanted them to be fierce and to remind the pupils to be responsible for their mistakes. I totally agreed with him because it made perfect sense. So I told the whole class that we have to improve and suggested ways on how to improve. I told them not to horse around in class and raise your hand before you talk. Everyone did that and we slowly became a wonderful class. The teachers were surprised and impressed with everyone in the class. The teacher would smile from ear to ear as they managed to teach the class many things.

When I met Puii at the supermarket last weekend, he gave me a grin that I would not forget. He knew we had managed to change for the better. Puii decided to join our class activities and I was so excited. I was on cloud nine as I know Puii need not suffer any more hardship. Everyone in the class was elated to know that we had a guardian angel in the class in the form of a monster, a friendly monster. Puii also told me that he was very proud of what I had done for him and the class. All these were only possible because I did not chicken out of the challenge. Hurray! I did it!

Puii had become one of my classmates. He enjoyed himself in class! All this was only made possible by everyone in the class. Well done!

THE END !

Written by
Irene

11 comments:

leejoey said...

wow!

gin yen said...

Very nice story,Irene!!!!

leejoey said...

but is it a story or is it true???

gin yen said...

Super nice story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ChangChuFeng said...

nice,
cool

sheilaho said...

wow very nice story

Emily lim said...

hi!! i mat not know you irene but your non-fiction story is very very very super good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alicia chan said...

hi...my name is alicia chan yuo write is nice and cool

leejoey said...

who is Irene

Mendel said...

He is very cool.

tan shi ling said...

wow you are so.....smart if i am like you that will be great.