Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Robberies! written by Gabriel 3K


The thief (narrative)
One humid night, Vijayan Muniandy was looking for a job. His luck dried out as nobody wanted to hire him. Vijayan emptied all his pockets to find some money. Soon, Vijayan realised he was broke. He had no choice but to rob an elderly woman. Vijayan tailed the old woman. When Vijayan knew that it was the time to strike, he asked the old woman, "Where is the MRT station?" "If you go this way, you will see the MRT station," replied the old elderly woman. Vijayan ran into the lift at the nick of time when the lift doors almost closed. "I left my ez-link card at my friend's house," Vijayan told the elderly woman.
When the old woman went out of the lift, Vijayan snatched the old woman's gold chain and rushed down the staircase. The old woman was drenched in perspiration when she told her daughter the news. Her daughter immediately fished out her hand phone to call the police.
After fifteen minutes, the police arrived at their house. The female officer asked the old woman, "What had been stolen from you?" "My gold chain," replied the old woman truthfully.
After the robbery, Vijayan's greed took over him again. He used the same method to rob another woman. This time, a necklace was successfully robbed from the old woman. After the phone call from the second victim, the police began to take action. They visited pawnshops and soon found out that Vijayan had gotten $15,000.00 from pawning the jewellery.
After the two robberies that Vijayan had committed, he decided to escape to Malaysia for at least a year. At the custom, he was stopped by some police officers. They wanted Vijayan to go to the police station with them.
"Where were you on 27 April, 10.00 a.m. asked the police officer. "I was in Malaysia," replied Vijayan with a guilt written on his face. "It's no use denying it. All the evidence we have points at you," the police officer hissed. Vijayan had no choice but to admit he was responsible for robberies. Vijayan was then sentenced to 3 years and 9 months imprisonment.

2 comments:

mendel koh said...

great story i thing this story came from crime watch that we watched at you tube.

chu feng said...

use golden phrases is beter