Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Burglary (Written by Gabriel 3K)


P3 Situational Practice


One hot Thursday morning, I was dismissed from school. I was surprised to see my house's door slightly ajar. I quickly ran into the house and saw my mother tied and gagged to a chair.The whole house was in shambles. Furniture were overturned and many items were broken. I then heard a rustling sound in my room. At that time, I was full to the brim with curiosity.

Full of curiosity, I peered into the dark room. What I saw astounded me. There was a humongous figure ranshacking my cardboards and looking for me. I thought to myself," What a huge person! It is better not to mess with him!" As I was about to escape, I stepped on a piece of broken glass." Ouch!!"I shouted loudly. Then I felt something hit my head.
" Where does your mother keep her jewellery?"shouted the robber in an unpleasent growl, holding a pistol to my head." It's in my mother's room, the third cabinet" I replied in a scared tone. When the robber went to look for my mother's jewellery, I realised that the robber did not tie me up properly. with immense strengh, I freed myself from the binds of the rope. I also freed my mother using a shattered glass piece from the floor. My mother immediately fished out her
handphone to call the police.


Within a few minutes, the police arrived at my house, armed. When the robber heard the wailing sirens of the police cars, he tried to escape but he was surronded by policemen at every angle, pointing their guns at him. After a while, the robber was taken away for custody. After this accident, my mother will remember to lock the door the next time.

3 comments:

mei sin said...

this teach us we must check dialogues

Anonymous said...

THIS TEACH us when we write composition jotter we must check our spelling and dialog

mendel koh said...

what a great story that is!!!