I’m so glad that many of you have shown improvement in your composition writing. Well done! Many of you remembered to use many golden phrases, effective dialogues, apt adjectives and adverbs which made your stories fun to read.
These are some of my favourite phrases taken from your writing:
1) When I finally woke and regained consciousness, I found myself tied to the chair and my mouth gagged by a burglar who had many tattoos on his muscular arms. I felt goosebumps and a shiver down my spine when I saw him brandishing a sharp dagger threatening to kill us all!
2) “Put down your weapon and turn around slowly with your hands on your head!” the police officer hissed at the burly burglar.
3) My neighbour whispered, “Let’s lock the doors with these metal chains so that the burglar will be trapped inside.”
To celebrate your hard work, I went shopping at two flea markets during the one-week-break and bought many prizes for our MEGA auction at the end of the year. These are some of the prizes that you can bid for with your SUPERSTARS awards.
Congratulations!
Mr Kok
4 comments:
i want~~~~~~ the pen is so cute~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so nice I love it
wow how i wished i have all if i got superstar i want to bid
I like the book-mark,because it has cool picture
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